With your eyes like the sea

and your heart crashing waves

you blend flawlessly

with every perfection surrounding

i would do anything to keep from losing you,

out there among the salty breeze.

i could not help but feel you there,

with your simple thoughts among the sand.

your careless speech collides with soft breathing

and here

together we create something infinite

with hearts of half open flowers

and minds of rain

reckless actions inhibit able bodies

adolescence at its best,

ignorant and angstful.

our biggest temptation is seeing the world,

our biggest mistake is knowing it’s ours.



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