War of Acceptance

Is it fear, theat is making everything seem so unclear.

or is it tryna' fit in, that makes us sin.

us teens, need to figure out what life really means.

there are other ways to solve 'em,

you know that thing called a problem.

so we don't need to be out on the streets, marking your name on certain concretes.

This L.A. population, is filled with us-the 20th century generation.

now let's be true, what's the whole point of a crew.

and let's be realistic, we are all a statistic. 

but humanity, shouldn't be a part of the statistic-animosity.

if you wish for someone who would hold your hand,

and tell you they understand.

they are there, and they are also the one's who care.

now if you are felling lonely, thinking you're fighting this war just you only.

you're wrong, you're not the only one tryna' stay strong.

if you've figured out that this war of acceptance is contagious,

you've porobably also figured out that it is extremely outregeous.

so let's not be relentless, and stop fighting this war of acceptance.

because you're living a life full of pain, now what will that gain.

maybe just another way to suffer, think about how much you can offer.

especially to that one kid who's also fighting,

and stand up to the ones who think this war is exciting.

but make them feel pain deep in the core,

and finally end this war!!!

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