Walls

Thu, 04/10/2014 - 08:53 -- Sumonte
 
Outside, Inside 
 
Stone on the outside, sponge on the inside 
Absorbing every feeling, holding it in 
They expand inside, they cracked outside 
Spilling every feeling, letting it out 
Hurt on the outside, hurt on the inside 
 
Retraction, Connection 
 
Stone is to retract, sponge is to connect 
Remaining in hiding, holding it in 
Outside they connect, inside I retract 
Spilling every feeling, letting it out 
Love on the outside? Love on the inside? 
 
Inside to outside? Love.

Comments

Sumonte

Sponges absorb. My friend didn't get that. Lol

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