"On The Virge" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 3/6/2006

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United Kingdom

Some People Have Said That My Poetry Is On The EDGE... !!!
Well I Have To Say That I DON'T Concur... !!!!
My Usage of Words Is... " On The Virge "... !!!
So Here's A Few To Give You Proof...
That My Words Share Views That Give You Clues...
About Issues... In The Daily News...
So Some Are TRUE And Some Are NOT... !!!
It's Down To You To Connect The Dots...
I Connect My Prose And Make It Flow...
And That's The Way My Poems Go...
Highs And Lows WITHOUT Pound Notes...
Or Cocaine Used To FILL My Nose... !!!!!
So Am I On The Edge Or On The... Brink... !?!
Because My Words Make People... THINK... ?
I'm... ON THE VIRGE Do You Get The Link... ???
I Question Things That Take Leanings...
To Devising NEEDLESS Killings...
Or Hiding Truth From Tomorrows' Youth...
Those Who Choose To Act UNCOUTH... !!!
BEFORE They LOSE Their Cool And Use...
Shady Moves With ABUSIVE Crews... !!!
MANY of Them Are ON The Edge And CLEARLY STRESSED... !!!!!
I Write For Those Whose Minds Are Closed...
And Have PROBLEMS That STRESS Their Heads... !!!
Those Now STUCK In DUD Systems... !!!
That's My Word And It's ON THE VIRGE... !!!
But NOT THE WAY Some People Say... !!!
My Pen And Page EXPEND My RAGE............ !!!!!
So... On The EDGE I Think NOT Folks... !!!
DON'T Be Misled My Words Display...
A LEVEL Head Until UPSET... !!!!
And Then My Prose Can Be... MOROSE...
But LISTEN CLOSE And Then You'll KNOW...
I Never Try To Incite Fights... !!!!!
I'm Merely Asking Why Man WHY Do We Comply...
With Those Perpetrating... EVIL Crimes....... !?!
People SUFFER, Starve And DIE... !!!
While Money's Spent On SATELLITES... !!?!!
Don't These Doings Upset You...
And Leave You RUING Things You Do... ?!?
My Questions YES... UNSETTLE A Few... !!!!!
In Fact I Think That MANY Conclude...
... "That Big Virge dude, should see a shrink !
... He can't be well ! His words won't sell !
... Maybe one day, he'll kill himself !"

Well NOT JUST YET My EDGY Friend...
I'm CLOSE To The Edge But WATCH My Step... !!!!!
Try Watching YOURS And HELP The Cause...
Before Your Jaws EXPOSE Your Flaws... !!!!!
My Wordplay SOARS And Sometimes ROARS... !!!
I'm Looking For ZION And WON'T STOP Trying...
While MANY Seem FRIGHTENED... !!!!!!
of Words That I'm Writing And Now Reciting....
So Why Is That Do Words I Write Make You Feel Trapped... ?!?
Well LISTEN UP Man STAY OFF The Crack... !!!!!
The Deck IS STACKED And I'm The Leader of THIS Pack... !!!!!
I'm Black Like Jack And Use My Spade...
To DIG UP FACTS And Artefacts....
Then Use My Pen To Express Via Page...
Which Helps Me VENT My Days of Pain... !!!
Especially When I Then Display...
My Rage On Stage In Poetic Ways... !!!
I Never Really Like To Shout...
Because My Voice Makes QUITE A NOISE... !!!
I'd Rather Show POISE And Use The Ploy...
of... Dulcet Tones To Get Things Home...
Sometimes That Style STILL RATTLES Bones... ?!?
But Only Those Whose Minds Are VILE... !!!!!
And Choose To Hide Behind Their LIES...
Don't I Have THE RIGHT To..... CRITICISE..... ?!?
Sometimes I'm WRONG... Sometimes I'm RIGHT...
And Sometimes YES... Am JUSTIFIED... !!!
I Guess I'm Blessed To Speak My Mind...
While Some Suggest I'm On THE EDGE... !!!
DON'T Be ABSURD My Use of WORDS Is On The Virge...
So DON'T Be Scared If You Get... "Snared"...
By Wordplay YES EARLIER Prepared.... !!!!!
It's Really NOT WAR That I Declare....
But Simply THIS A... " Savoir Faire "...
That Proves That I'm NOT ON The Edge... !!!
But ON POINT Son My Wordplay Runs Like...
.... " Dum Diddy' Dum Dum, Huh, Dum Dum..... "
See Sometimes YES I Can Have FUN... !!!
Let Me Take A Guess Right Now You're STUNNED... !?!
Well Now You KNOW Having Read This Prose...
That BIG VIRGE IS The ... CHOSEN ONE ... !!!
Like Anakin' I Am Destined To Walk Within This World of SINS....
Through Use of Scripts And EDGY Words That I Confirm....

Are.....

................. " On The Virge " ..................

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