Vicious Crunch

Don't be a brat! BAM BAM Stop being stupid! BAM BAM You need to learn! BAM BAM Don't fucking talk to me! BAM BAM She lies on the floor tears spilling from her eyes, blood from her mouth, the world spins, And All she hears is the same vicious crunch she always hears when he is mad, BAM BAM.


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