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It's when the vibe in my mind,
is defiened by the time,
and me mood rises above mellow,
when your faced with the fact,
that all enemies attack,
even when the sun burns out yellow,
when you get tired of denial,
you just pick up and dial,
but the other line is subjected to trial,
you decline to disconnet and now your left,
with the feel of being betrayed,
and rejected with disrespect,
when all seems to fail,
you can't seem to over come or prevail
then out of the blue and angel comes along,
and tells you welcome to hell



hope you like my poem's the best one i gt.

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incredible poem

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