Born and raised in SLC
I am a mormon and I try to see
how you can sit there and judge me.

I do my thing, on my own time
I try to help the world with my rhymes
but you sit there and try to tell me iv crossed a line

I choose not to smoke, have sex, or drink
but you there tell me to take a minute to think

I stand up for the things I believe
because there are greater things to achieve

Unrestricted by world addictions
I'm a living contradiction



Kristen Shumway

Thanks Alexander. I feel the same way. Too free for criticizers.

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