unknown pain

baby girl I see you got the finest ass 
too bad you ain't got no class 
your lack of education shows desperation 
you seek for fame instead of self gratification.
you got your eyes on the prize but the price ain't worth it  
I got my eyes on the picture but it ain't picture perfect.
I'm scheming every night to get your love.
I breathe every night because of your love.
Problem is I don't know why I want your love.
I don't know why you appeal to my taste.
All I know is it's you and only you I want to see in the morning.
I love that face.

but perception be the reason for deception.
right now your deceive to believe that the truth is not true.
tell me how many words do I have to write to get it through.
that my passion for love is because of you.
I can craft poems songs a musical and more.
but its like you wouldn't know what love was 
even if it came to knock on your front door.

I hate to lye so on this line I awake.

Tell me the truth.
was it really me or was it really you 
you had to let go we couldn't make it through.
I know I'm optimistic and your pessimistic.
but there's an underlying fact here and I must have missed it.
my goal for this is not to say sorry.
but I can't help it.
I'm a classic man just like Atari.
tell me why I messed up 
and I'll corrected.
but if I didn't mess up then tell me if you're hurt who didn't use protection

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