This is such a beautiful piece. Your words are confident and well informed.

your choice of setting compliments your personality in the video and that is an integral

part of poetry.

I love the way your voice was louder in parts you that needed to be.

That is a feature that assures the reader that this is your honest words. yoour words

are BRAVE and STRONG. keep making these videos and share them with the world

because many folks need to hear your wisdom.

p.s. the squirrel was a great addition to the video, even if it was not intended.

best,

rojas