Tunnel Vision

Tue, 06/04/2013 - 11:31 -- MillNa


United States
41° 26' 2.148" N, 81° 31' 55.974" W

RING! RING! Click!
A text came through
It reads "WHR R U?"
Not parked, moving motion
CRASH! SLAM! SCREECH! What's the commotion?
Three spins and a twist your wrapped around a pole
Broken bones and a bloody nose
Your in a comma, the crash was fatal
Your friends and family feels the betrayal
The memories of you tears them apart
Should've left it alone from the start
Now your gone, no more you
No more family barbecues
Your holding up traffic, its a green light
DNT TXT ND DRV 2 C ANTHR NGHT (don't text and drive to see another night)

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