Off the Tracks

Taken from the rhythm of life

Immersed into the pit of life as you know  it

Guided yet lost

Controlled yet self- determined

Sought after as a case revived by the aid of hope

In all that I have in all that I'm leaving

Sailing on the tracks

Yanked away by the city of golden life

A way

A new way

You've seen it in a dream

To my advantage

In the darkest night my ship has sailed

Off the tracks

 

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

well said

never run from a problem, makes matters worse

through any midst of fear, you show courage

it will help you overcome hardships you face

continue to build off your ideas and keep writing

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