Too Sweet

i loved a boy who hated everything sweet.

i made him a cake but didn't add any sugar,

yet he still said it was too sweet.

i bought him candies but made sure only the sour,

yet he still said they were too sweet.

i gave him gifts but put in only my thoughts,

yet he still said they were too sweet.

no matter what i did, i couldn't help but do it with love.

 

perhaps i was the one that was too sweet

 

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