"Too Much Of A Good Thing"

Sun, 03/16/2014 - 18:02 -- eddiem1

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"Too much of a good thing is bad for you" they say...

But I don't really pay attention to them anyways

 

I stare into your eyes,

Notice the nice deep brown within them.

Reminding me of a time 

Wandering through the forest 

Passing the browns of the barks owned by their Pines

Oh how magnificent the sight was!

 

But then you say,"Too much of a good thing is bad for you."

I don't listen to you anyways.

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