Too Eager…

Sat, 05/25/2013 - 23:36 -- Wassuhp

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08550
United States
40° 16' 43.0896" N, 74° 37' 41.9952" W

MaYbE wE'rE aLl ToO eAgEr,
ToO gRoW uP & gEt a LiFe

MaYbE wE'rE aLl ToO eAgEr,
ToO rUn AwAy FrOm AlL oUr StRiFe

MaYbE wErE aLl ToO eAgEr
ToO qUiT tHe HoMe FoR tHe DoRm

MaYbE wE'rE aLl ToO eAgEr
ToO hIdE bEhInD a LiGhTlEsS fOrM

MaYbE wE'rE aLl ToO eAgEr
ToO rUn UnTo ThAt BeAcH

MaYbE wE'rE aLl ToO eAgEr

ToO hEaR oUr OwN wIsE sPeEcH

Maybe we're all too eager
Too eager indeed

Too eager to go fast
Then wonder why the time has past

Too eager to go back
Then wonder what it is we lack

Too eager to get more
Staring through the empty spaces on floor

Too eager
Makes us too Meager

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