Tonight I stay around

Tonight I stay around. 
the meaningless talks, the gray smoke
the spills of wine, and a dress soaked 
by the evening rain, by the evening pain. 
Tonight I stay around. 
the dark sky with its lost eyes 
leaving me without a way back 
to your rose petals, oh how fatal.  
Tonight I stay around 
the broken glass, the stains of blood
from a heart that you have now dropped 
in the evening rain, in the evening pain. 

This poem is about: 
Me
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