At 11:32 PM I stopped your tears 
You stopped screaming her name
You stopped calling for Death
At 1:14 AM you called me "baby"
You asked me if I was blushing
I called you "love"
At 2:44 AM I told you I liked the way you said my name
You told me you loved me
I told you I knew
At 2:58 AM I asked if you remember the first time we kissed
I told you I loved you
You told me you knew
At 4:23 AM you stopped my tears
You reminded me that you felt guilty too
We agreed on someday
At 5:19 AM we agreed to never talk about tonight again


Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

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