THOUGHTS

 

I have always wanted to be the best..

I have always wanted not to be like the rest

I have always wanted to conquer the rest

But am not really the best to them

For me to become the best,  I have to dress like the rest

For me to be the best, I have to think like the rest

For me to be the best,I have to talk and walk like the rest

But am not the best to them

I thought that I had to be unique

I thought that I had to have a great mind

I thought I had to have great character

But they say I have no great personality

I thought am trying to be the best

I thought I had to please the one above to be the best

I thought that I had to be like my master

But they say that's very poor

I thought that I have to be obedient

I thought I had to be kind

I thought that I had to be polite

But i guess my thoughts never got me there

I am tired with all these hullabaloo

I am tired of listening to all that trash

I am tired of knowing what they think

As a matter of fact I think am running mad trying to

I will forever live as i want to

No ! As my master says i do

i will forever live to please Abba

i will not be wicked  to please you

Furthermore He said am the best

He said He has plans for me

He said He will forever love me

And you think I will dump Him for you..

NEVER!!

Never  will i run from him

Never will i displease Him

Never will I listen to you

Forever  I will live for Him

Now i think my thoughts make sense now...

Now i can be the best...I am the best..

I don't think that..i know that

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Jan Wienen

In the end ... It's all about Him ... and always will be ...

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