They Will Be Here For You

Roses are red

Violets are blue

I know its hard

But you'll make it through

With your friends on your side

Ready to hold you just in case you cry

And the roses are still red

The violets are still blue

They'll be here a while and so should you.

This poem is about: 
My community

Comments

ECastaneda

i think you can maybe add more and it is a good poem. Manuel Gallo

 

ECastaneda

good poem of boling Joshua lopez

ECastaneda

Love how you use the roses or red, Violets are blue, and how you made it creative with it. -Sonia Patlan

ECastaneda

I like how your peom is about how your friends or someone will be there for you

Jose Fernandez

ECastaneda

Adrian - I Like How You Put It With Your Friends

ECastaneda

Its short but pretty good

-Ulises Castaneda

ECastaneda

explaining how bullying is happening,I love the part with your friends-Ulisses R.

ECastaneda

i like that your poem has a lot of rhyming words- demarice

ECastaneda

i like that your poem has a lot of rhyming words- demarice

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