That's It

Mon, 05/20/2013 - 13:26 -- emaris

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95355
United States
37° 40' 13.62" N, 120° 55' 48.936" W

When I tell you to take care,
when it’s the last words you hear me say,
it’s because since you won’t let me do it for you,

I’m begging you to sustain yourself
until someone else comes along
and does the job better than you or I
ever could.

So, do it for me, since you won’t let me.

Take care.

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