THANK YOU LORD

I JUST WANT TO TAKE THIS MOMENT TO HUMBLE MY HEART

GOING TO APOLOGIZE TO THE PERSON WHO WAS WITH ME FROM THE START

I WAS BLINDED BY SOMEONES CHARM THAT HIT ME WITH SOME STARS

ASKING LORD TO GIVE ME A CHANCE TO CONFRONT THAT PERSON AND TELL HER SHE HAS GONE TOO FAR

WHEN FIRST TIME I SAW YOU, YOU SMART WITH YOUR CHOICES

AND NOW YOU ARE DOING BAD STUFF BECAUSE OF THOSE BAD NEGATIVE VOICES

GOT YOURSELF WASTED WISHING YOU COULD BE DRUNK AND MAKE ALL THOSE STUPID NOISES

BUT YOU NEVER DRINK BECAUSE THE ONLY REASON YOU DRINK IS TO GET SOMEONE OUT OF YOUR MIND

YOU THINK THAT IS FINE

HELL NOT YOU ARE F****** BLIND

THERE ARE OTHER WAYS TO SOLVE THOSE KIND OF PROBLEMS

BUT DRINKING, SMOKING, AND SEX IS NOT. THEY ARE JUST CAUSES

CAUSES TO SOME OF THE LOSSES

LOSSES THAT CREATES DEATH RATE WITH STORIES THAT HAS SOLEMNS

SO IF YOU KEEP IT UP, I'M SORRY I WILL LEAVE YOU

I CAN'T BELIEVE IT, WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO

DON'T JUST ACT LIKE A FOOL

YOU ARE NOT JUST A TOOL

DON'T USE THAT JUST TO LOOK COOL

YOU ARE STILL YOUNG AND YOU GO TO SCHOOL

SO DON'T USE ITS HABIT AS AN EXCUSE

BECAUSE THAT ANSWER GOT ME CONFUSE

YOU SAID IT RUNS IN THE FAMILY BUT THATS STUPID

I KNOW YOU ARE LYING YOU LOVE TO DO IT

I AM TELLING YOU KNOW TO LOOSE IT

BECAUSE IF YOU DON'T DO ANYTHING, I WILL

AND I WILL SHOW YOU HOW IT FEELS

TO BE USED AS THE THIRD WHEEL.

I THANK YOU LORD FOR OPENING UP MY EYES

FROM ALL HER FAKE LOVE, AND LIES

SHE WAS PLAYING WITH MY MIND

TOO BAD I WAS TOO KIND

I COULD NOT CONFRONT HER BECAUSE THAT LOOK FROM HER EYES

THAT MAKES ME FEEL WEAK INSIDE 

BUT NOW I KNOW THAT THE JOY OF THE LORD IS MY STRENGTH 

IT GAVE ME THE POWER TO WALK ANOTHER LENGTH

AND TO STOP MYSELF FROM GOING TO DEATH

NOW I AM HAPPY THAT I TURNED BACK TO YOU

GUESS ALL I HAVE TO DO

IS TO FOLLOW YOU

WHILE CARRYING MY CROSS, TO BECOME SOMEONE NEW

NOW FOR YOU I WILL STAND

AND PREACH YOUR WORD TILL THE END

BLESS EACH AND EVERYONE ELSE THAT NEEDS TO BE CONDEMN

IN JESUS NAME I PRAY, AMEN

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Thank you for your honesty to be openly candid in asking The Lord to guide you
Do me a favor and read Matthew 5:44
It talks so truthfully about doing good and being even more humble
Well said in this poem

Chronicle

Thanks for the advice, it relly got in to me when I read it. It was very helpful, and I made a lot foes as a friend now. Thank You So Much !!!

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