the temptation of Robert Velez Jr.

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

there are many Satans in this world
to see me fall
to see me fail
to see me lose
to see me not overcome
sure enough doesn't feel like i'm being welcome
i always have high standards of myself
never believe in compromising myself
for what
to please others
the satans are jealous my success
the enemies that plot to assassinate me like Martin Luther King
this is not the song i sing
real men do real things
this is why they are constantly scheming
keep dreaming
dreams do come true
not at the expense of degrading or hurting people in which later on in life, i'll be singing sorry blues
mistakes i made in my life, i pay my dues
many times, temptation is powerful
more powerful than the man of steel
my determination to not give in shows that i'm real
there are people biting off my style because all they do is steal
my navigation to be the absolute best is more clearer than misdirections of the g.p,s. system
my hunger to stand out will never succumb to temptations of evil deeds
my drive to be the greatest speaks for itself when i continue to grow more seeds

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