How to avoid getting burned

If the flames feel so good

From righteousness I have turned

Eating the forbidden fruit


Immortality is my wish

For I know what hell awaits me

Pray for me, my second wish

And for my salvation make a plea


The hollow feeling comes after

Who have I become

I head to a place with no laughter

My path down the valley of death has begun

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