Tear

its so stupid

how we can be greeted

it is as if people don't care what they say

like their words can mold us like clay

 

at first you don't know how to react

then their words finally sink in and it's like you've been whacked 

your feelilngs have been hurt

i can believe you that you would feel like dirt

 

you keep these things to yourself

because you don't want to bother anyone else

 

i know you think it will be better for everyone else if you say nothing

but just think of all the weight you would be bearing

 

since your lips are sealed

and feeling concealed

nobody can ever help you

or be your rescue

 

so you move farther into that pit

where you will eventually sit

you will not move because you have become stuck

all there is is muck

 

since your emotions are not expressed 

you become depressed

a stone is what you are 

to help with the pain you use cigars

 

drugs become your friend

you think your feelings are amended 

when you take them

all your doing is pushing yourself farther and farther into that pit

where you will sit

 

you feel like yelling or something

 

your mind will explode

you are not in controll

you sit on the seat of a  toliet 

feeling very upset

 

you have an assortment of pills in your hand and you swallow 

there will be no tomorrow

 

see, you took your life and ended it

 

there is a pit 

a girl in there sits

she will stay there forever

with most displeasure

 

it is so stupid

how we can be greeted

it is as if people don't care what they say

like there words can mold us like clay

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