I can’t forget the day, the day of many dark days

You came into my life on this low winter day

Of all the days, you CAME TODAY!!!

I wish you had stayed and never strayed away to see me

on that lovely day of all days.

No one knew of this particular day,

Oh what a wasted and changing day my sir,

Please just come back another day.

You’ll never understand what you have done,

on this dry cold day in November.



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