Take me as I am

Today, i walk with fire in my soul,

living between untethered moments

of rapture and heartache.

Demanding you,

to take me as i am.


Take my mundane mind

and turn me into something extraordinary.

Take my molded soul

and unravel me into ribbons of pure emotion

as We collide in one desperate and beautiful movement.

Leave me with nothing,

leave me with everything.

Surrender me to your wild and unyielding ways.

So achingly seized by this moment

that We are left,



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