TAKE

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The strongest man endures the darkest days

But to endure does not mean that he simply

Takes

And

He Takes

 

He takes and he cries and he takes and he breaks

 

He TAKES until his pain temporarily fades away

 

He TAKES to survive

Not to survive is to shake

Not to TAKE is to break

So he TAKES

 

The strongest man with no faith…

He TAKES and he BREAKS

And

                        He

And

                                    He

And

                                                He

 

becomes weary….

Until out of his eyes he can see clearly

 

He breaks loose all his chains

 

HE BREAKS

 

The strong man inside that he has been searching for

HE FINDS

HE SHAKES

and he cries…

Pours out from the inside

 

The strongest man endures

Breaks down his burden doors

 

He takes…..No more.

 

Comments

Gabvegi

powerful!

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