Sunshine Kisses

Location

89460
United States
38° 54' 1.8108" N, 119° 46' 38.4456" W

(poems go here) Before it’s too late, I care.
Listen, please do you hear me?
Is it too late? Have you left your skin bare?
Please, did you just breathe?

I came from you! Me, magically weaved in you!
One more second, please there’s music I need to share
Please, I can’t breathe.
You are not breathing.

Fingers locked together, I needed to hold your hand tighter?
One more second, I have to tell you
You are like the sun

You stopped shining
And here we are
This is it. You’re gone.
It’s permanent.

I didn’t get one more moment to sing love for you
Your love and life alive is all I need
I am sorry.
I was always here
And I love you.

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savigirl14

This poem is truly amazing.  I think sometimes we unfortunately try to help people when time has run out. Please read my poems because I would love some feedback

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