He made her feel so alive She yearned for that feeling of joyOnly he gave that to herHer eyes lit up like the night sky at the very sight of himHer heart came out of her chest with every word he spoke and lyric he sangShe felt so alive with him Before him, she felt the emptiness But he filled it with his love She made it so easy for him to take it away and he didHe left her with a void and now the feeling of death crept back inHer soul had been blown away Her mind sunk like a ship in the sea ashis waves crashed over her sails and brought them down to the bottom of the oceanAnd now she'll never feel that liveliness againNow she's lying in the pit of the oceans heart with hers lost at sea.
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