Sun

Location

Grand Rapids Community College
143 bostwick
United States
32° 5' 54.276" N, 91° 11' 32.424" W

Sun

So bright

Keeps me warm

Keeps me light

In the morning

You start my day

But after noon

You fade away

Then I start to think

Why do you leave day after day?

After I realize

I come to the conclusion

That your brightness is so majestic and grand

That everyone needs it!

So the next day

I wake up and embrace you

Sun

Dont go away!

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