Summer's Wings

Location

46901
United States
40° 30' 35.82" N, 86° 9' 17.3772" W

You are so beautiful
The most beautiful thing I've ever seen
Still can't believe
You gave him your self esteem
Still can't believe
How quickly you lost your worth
How I remember the times
He made you feel less than dirt
And now you wear his ring
But with him you'll never be a queen
Though you treat him like a king
And twice you've bared his seed
I'd always hoped you would one day see you
See the beauty from within
And find yourself again
But the years have gone by
And I really miss my friend
I know that some where down inside you
She hides
Praying awaiting her release
To fly away as a butterfly
Spreading her beautiful wings for the world to see

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savigirl14

Beautiful poem. The point of view from the protective friend. I like it a lot. Please read my poems and tell me what you think.

Keshia1119

Thank you. How do I find your poems? As you can see I don't use this site and forgot I even posted a poem. So I don't really know much about navigating the site.

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