Suicide Plan

 They always said:

 
Suicide was the Queen
Death was the Devil
Overdosing were the Demons
The self-inflicted were the
witches 
 
The rope 
hanging 
from the
ceiling 
was love
 
The tears 
she shed 
were for a
boy that
didn't love
her
 
She tried to 
kill herself 
 
These white walls circled her
 
Did she have a suicide plan?
 
Use the bullet 
from the gun to
blow your brains 
out?
 
Drown yourself in bath water?
 
Use the knife to slice?
 
Use the razor blades 
to cut the wrists?
 
Worried and angry I never knew
 
Never their
to help her
 
Even more 
worried she
doesn't have a
father
 
In a big white room look yourself
 
In the mirror 
i'm sorry but
your idiot 
 
Would you burn yourself to a crisp?
 
Cut your wrists in half?
 
Jump into lake Michigan?
 
Hang yourself from the ceiling? 
 
All this 
for a boy
your a idiot 
 
They always 
say Suicide was
the Queen 
 
Death was the Devil 
 
Overdosing were the Demons 
 
The self-inflicted were the Witches 
 
The knifes were for slicing 
 
The razor 
blades were
used to cut
the wrists 
that were
of love
 
For a boy 
that didn't 
love her
 
Was this a plan or a suicide note?
 
When that hot
blood runs cold
the razor blades
are gone
 
The slicing has stopped
 
The bottle of
aspirin rolls
from your hand
 
The needles 
pinching the 
skin drops
 
Than you'll 
understand your
prefect and loved
 
By everyone 
 
You were there
for me i want to 
be their for you
 
Your my best friend 
 
You will understand 
your prefect and loved
 
By everyone
 
I wish i was there for you
 
In the end 
you'll understand
your prefect 
and loved by
everyone
This poem is about: 
My family
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Comments

Lynn G.

Please forgive me, but there were several simple spelling errors and confusion with which word of the same sound is correct, i.e: there, their, they're and you're, your are all completely different things. I don't mean to be mean, I just would like to bring it to your attention in order for you to make corrections if you so desire. However I love the use of a repetition, and although a dark subject, I thought that there was a fair display of multiple emotion. Good job.

Lexi Cornelia Diaz Villanueva

Thank you very much and its alright.

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