Suicide Notes

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*CAUTION* i am not sucidal. This ponders why people commit Suicide.

cold AND heavy

I try to HOLD it STEADY

Where to put it?

to my HEAD?

or my HEART?

I just want to put the TRIGGER

these ARE my Suicide notes.

 

Warm and Light

it Takes all my MIGHT

to Swallow the whole BOTTLE

am I going to Past out?

or DIE?

I just wanna DIE

these are MY suicide NOTES

 

hot AND tight

it also GIVES me Fright

how to TIE it

up High or

DOWN low

I just Wanna put it Around my NECK and Hang

these Are my Sucide notes

 

You don't THINK i wanna DIE?

this Isn't a LIE

i'm SICK of my LIFE

and the PEOPLE in IT

TIRED of Crying

AND being Angry all the TIME

These are MY suicide NOTES

 

my HEART is SHATTERED

It's been BATTERED

nobody Understands me

i FEEL SO lonely

Outside i seem HAPPY

but Inside i'm DYING

these ARE my SuiCidE notes

 

my Life is Done

I've finally won

no More crying

NO more ANGER

OR loneliness

i'm GONE

Death

THESE ARE MY suicide notes

 

 

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Comments

savigirl14

WOW.....This poem is deep and emotional. Its really scary to think of a loved one writing any of those notes. Keep writing and read my poems I would like your feedback

JasmineLyn37

This is really amazing, you are a very good poet.

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