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Climb the ladder sir 

Climb it all the way to

the top if ye hath to,

don't fiddle with thy step

Keep steady pace

ongoing towards the light 

Thy does not see?Why

tis right above ye head 

Maybe thy is the only one

to see such beauty,If it

were mine I wouldn't let

go.Keep going sir almost

there,I would go as far as 

the ladder led ,for sir not 

seeing, he won't be able to

reach where I too desire

to go by the lead of the

ladder,Yes sir you finally

made it,what do you see now ?

I see what you saw 

What is it,go on? 

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This poem is about: 
My country
Our world

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