Sprite is Not a Pepsi Product

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21917
United States
39° 39' 47.88" N, 76° 5' 49.9236" W

Bubbles flutter to surface searching free
Attempting to find their home above tide
But try not to leave comrades back at sea

And who would stay down below without need
To see the glimmers of sky without bind
Bubbles flutter to surface searching free

But I’ve noticed these spheres travel north gleam-
Ing strong, ready to collide and breathe, glide
Bubbles flutter to surface searching free

Stragglers fizz about bottom ridges seem
Prepared to burst at carbonated bind
Bubbles flutter to surface searching free

With a shake, you could be forced up and free
And replacements come with new year; rise
But try not to leave comrades back at sea

Shoot for the top without worry of cease
This is just the move of mobile sea tides
Bubbles flutter to surface searching free
But try not to leave comrades back at sea

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