Sonnet Alpha

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You are as soothing as an autumn breeze, 

For I can confess my every thought.

When I'm alone with you I feel at ease-

As you gently blow my way what I've sought.

 

While you surround me and break down my walls,

And bring me comfort where none can be found,

You never fail to respond to my calls,

Nor refuse to save me when I have drowned.

 

But you never respond or give advice,

For you only allow me to reflect.

Unrequited love is your only price,

And even though deep I cannot object.

 

You hold great emotions casually,

Yet you fail to live or exist freely.

 

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