so many tears

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10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

tears streaming down little girls faces
hatred words are thrown left and right
they don't know how to fight
the knife cutting which way
is suicide the right way
is there such a place
where would all the lost sould go?
beautiful smile beautiful eyes
how well they mask the pain
knowing deep inside, they are hurting
i can sense and see right straight to their core
it's as if they bleed
i pray for their salvation
in their eyes, going away is their elimination
from the cruel world that exists
my little seraphim
i can say all that can stop them from leaving
but i will not protect them anymore
how i wish my words will teach them to gain strength
to understand
there is more to life than what's in their immediate surroundings
when they died, so many tears was shed
there is no more i can share
the cycle continues

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Reinanena

And yet the story of her will continue...deep poem and hopefully those words written above will save another life each day...you should post this for the cause of suicide..

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i posted this under section of suicide as a form of awareness
thank you for your feedback

Hot Rod

meh, decent. sounds more like your just talking about what happened to some girl.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Again, read the poem again

This is not a poem about some girl, poem is about young girls or women that went through a struggle and need outreaches to help them feel worthy

This is about awareness

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