Smudges

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Your marks on me,

like smudges on glass,

from a nose and a pair of lips - 

yours pressed to mine.

 

I wipe at the pane,

and wipe at the pain.

 

Those smudges remain,

and distort my vision,

rippling under my fingers.

 

The smudges change,

and thus change how I see.

 

But though they blur,

I do not wish them gone.

 

For to a simple lawn,

they add a fantasy,

a blurry prism of green and yellow

rioting against all order.

 

Your smudges add clarity as they blur the glass.

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