Slip

Taking my new heart, I'll have a fresh start

I'm turning my head, I won't watch you walk away

Why do you always walk away?

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

8 years ago

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.   

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