Sleep-Pea
20 mattresses,
20 down beds,
1 pea,
And a princess (me).
A pea is nothing.
But when you are sinking into feathers
and are pressed to the ceiling-
That is when your sleep is uncomfortable feeling.
In the end I got my prince
And a more comfortable bed.
Even though I had to spend that night sleepless
Everything turned out fine, I guess.
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S.zaynab.k
7 years ago
Wow funtastic. How u compare to a Disney princess is novel n super. I like to compare to beauty n the beast. There's a superb rhyming word choice too, how u rhymed guess with sleepless was artsy. Thumbs up.
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