Seeking Success

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Success ?

How do I obtain you?

You're making it difficult for me.

It seems like everytime I get closer,

You go further.

Are you doing this on purpose?

I'm trying not to give up,

But i'm almost there.

I swear!

I've searched for you everywhere.

Through mountains, forests, and fields,

I  just cant deal.

What do I have to do to reach you?

I am struggling and exhausted.

Yet the minute i give up,

I'll probably miss you.

So I refuse!

I must do what I must do.

If I'm not willing to work hard for it,

Success is something I can not expect.

Eventually my sweat and tears

Shall make me a successful peer!

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