See Me

Tue, 05/14/2013 - 01:11 -- Deen


United States
47° 3' 31.1976" N, 122° 23' 55.6224" W

Let me be,
Notice me,
Take the pain away.

Help me see,
Set me free,
So I can breathe again.

Look at me,
Come cry with me,
'Cause I could use a friend.

Would it be,
So could it be,
I'd smile at the end.

I let you see,
It frightens me,
The poison's setting in.

I can not speak,
You can not see,
I shut it up again.

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