Hey you . . . yes beautiful you . . . 
                  Come close to me . . . Okay, please.
           Let me whisper in the sweetness of your ear.
                   Closer so everyone can see . . .                  
                   Got a well known secret:  Not the foggiest idea what I’m doing!
            Heart’s wires suddenly spark and shout:

                                                              Heart’s tenderness is inside out!
                                                    Mind says: Better figure it out!

                                            Something . . . somewhere else says:  



                                    Go ahead and love her . . . don’t spoil the surprise.


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