Seasons by Anonymous

Seasons
four seasons in a year

summer is the best one 

in the winter it's cold 

The spring is wet and muddy 

the spring is the best time to play spring aau

then comes the hot,sticky and, humid summer 

the summer has just the right heat for the juicy beach 

Then the fall comes with school and school work 

then high school basketball starts again 

and the cycle starts again 

 

Comments

Glena Waterhouse

Nice beginning for your second poem. Enjoyed the rythim. Keep in mind that when

you ttile something called "Seasons," there are four of them and you wrote about three.

You may want to revisit the title. Good job.

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