same love

Sun, 02/16/2014 - 23:36 -- Jeevin

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Kiss me all the way to the sun

Our love has only just begun

Yet I feel this is just too fun

but when it's all said and done

i feel In My heart you are the one

who will have my best interests

Knowing me I can go in-depth

loyal , caring and funny like me

And I know its meant to be

because you are just like me

My visions you can see

therefore you get me , you feel me ,your on my level

You like what I like ,we do be alike ,we are too mental

We know each other's thoughts before we even speak

when we are bored together we watch WWE and eat

We like to make most of each day andd listen to reggae 

and take long drives to the best views on a sunday

This love is new but I know us so well it's really working

but that's how u know the love is real because we are literally the same person

differences do occur for us but we still like two peas in the pod

we are just 2 laid back lovers beating the odds.

-jeevin

 

 

 

Comments

Jeevin

A song so moving I felt revived

the rhythm made my senses alive

A voice and instruments in a symphony 

the connection to the lyrics gave out my sympathy 

To the artist whose lyrics dug deep so significantly 

The message answered everything causing an epiphany 

he sang the story of my life and I wanted him to go on

the truth of his words Ied me to hold on

gripping the intro ,bridge ,chorus ,and verse

The story he spoke were exactly like my words

he put everything on the line to sing something I could feel

each note stung my heart for the pain I heard was real 

strumming his soul out and speaking seducingly as I was listening

his song answered every question I came across through his singing

 

-jeevin sekhon

 

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