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I really like how you said "boom" because that really goes to the story. Also i like it because it makes the story very interring by letting the reader that something big happened.

I like how you say something like the river of blood,and the school shooting.

Jose Fernandez

Adrian - I Like How You Put "Boom" then said Goodbye that was good

Its cool how you added your title into your poem

-Ulises Castaneda Mendoza

I like it how you're one of the victim to explain how u are-Ulisses R.

Your poem is deep and it is sad too-demarice

Your poem is deep and it is sad too-demarice

i like your poem u show how you feel-lia