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My close friend Luis decided to drive around in his motorcycle.

Luis was innocent, he just wanted to drive around...

So happy to be driving, the wind hitting his face, ignoring everyone.

He wanted to be in the army, he always talked about it.

But later that day something terrible happened.

Luis lost control of the motorcycle at about 9:30 p.m.

Luis was taken to Lawrence General Hospital.

He was pronounced dead at 9:44 p.m.

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