Remain loving you


Buffalo Flats
Melbourne Road
South Africa
Don't imprison me with your determined boundaries of fear and unhappiness 
My love is real, unwavering
Don't hold me so close, so tight I can't breathe 
My breathe is for you, unheedingly 
Don't shackle me,don't restrict me
I want to succeed,for you, breaking boundaries
Don't underestimate me, you raised me
I will use those values for good amid people
Don't use me as your crutch, I beg
I want you to be brave, fearless like all know you to be
Don't protect me from the world I bid, you can't 
I will utilize my reasoning, I will be here as long as God needs me to be
Don't be quick to anger when I am not perfect, none of us are
I will alway strive for perfection 
Don't feel the loss of a child, no
I need you to gain a female worth her independence 
Don't betray my love, ever
I desire this love as I will forever remain loving you


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