Relevance of thoughfulness

I woke from a sweet
dream
where someone cared to hold my
hand but really held my heart.
Only for rain to fall and words to
echo, echo, echo in my ear
"She doesn't care
about you"
She doesn't care
She doesn't care
with the underlying question,
well who really does?
And only silence followed after
as the rain continued to fall.
Each drop wondering
why
it lives in a world
that doesn't care.

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