release

she exhales
a barely audible whisper 
dissipating slowly 
through the drifting currents 
of the wind 
and with that solitary 
spoken word 
hardly a sound that 
exited, yet danced 
off of her pallid 
lips
she discovered a
peace,
a freedom 
only experienced by those who
release 
the negative, weighted emotions 
harbored for too long 
and inhale a chilling 
refreshing breath
of hope 

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