Sat, 08/03/2013 - 14:10 -- debbalt


The way you smile at me is intoxicating.

So much so, that every moment I look at you is degrading.

Your spirit is like a two-edged sword.

It can cut through my mind when I'm bored.

I have so many desires 

That all want to take me higher

But with you I'm grounded

I can't fly without being hounded

This feeling makes me feel fettered

But as you wish, it's what you preferred.

Please give to me 

What you think I shall truly be.

With that I shall be truly satisfied

And now that I'm done, I'm truely tounge-tied.


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